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Canada is often seen as the epitome of a high-welfare, high-taxation country. While this model helps narrow the gap between the richest and the poorest—ultimately benefiting society as a whole—it may also undermine long-term economic development. High taxes can discourage talented individuals from starting businesses or running startups. Even worse, such a system may unintentionally encourage people to rely excessively on social benefits rather than contributing to the economy.

1. ✅is often seen as...

👉 被认为是……的典型/代表（客观表达 + 高阶语法）

Canada is often seen as the epitome of a high-welfare country.

Education is often seen as the key to upward mobility.

2. ✅While A helps/do X, it may also Y

👉 一边承认优点，一边指出代价（对比句经典句式）

While this model helps reduce inequality, it may also slow down innovation.

While working from home offers flexibility, it may also weaken teamwork.

3. ✅discourage ... from doing sth

👉 阻碍某人做某事（比inhibit自然，地道）

High taxes discourage entrepreneurs from launching new ventures.

Strict rules may discourage students from thinking independently.

4. ✅encourage (someone) to rely excessively on...

👉 表达“滥用”社会资源的委婉说法（高级、礼貌）

Overly generous welfare systems may encourage people to rely excessively on public support.

A lack of accountability might encourage teams to rely excessively on external help.

5. ✅rather than doing A, people choose to do B

👉 清晰对比（也是Task 2、Task 8高分模板）

Rather than creating value, some individuals choose to live off others.

Rather than investing in long-term growth, companies focus on short-term profit.

🧠 一句话帮你记住这些表达的“升级版逻辑”：

✅is often seen as→ 打开话题

✅while...may also...→ 正反结构

✅discourage / encourage→ 控制逻辑

✅rather than...→ 对比选择